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My name is 김효원. And I will be writing about the 'What new category would I add to the list and why?'. I will add education price. First, like Phytagoras, Aristotle, Socrates, and other scholars contribute to our education. We can study hard and can be a good person because of thier investigation. If scholars don't investigate about educate, we can't study and we can't be a good person and smart. So we have to give a price to a best scholar who investigate for descent. Second, the scholars investigae to teach us and make our society good. They endeavor to make society good. Most people think 'It is end after I die' but scholars are diiferent. They want to make people more happy from thier investigate. Their personality and thinks are great. Scholars who investigate for people have to be increase. Lastly, scholars who endeavor to make society good, should remain after we die. It will be remain in our descent's memory when the scholars get a Noble Prize. We have to memorize the good people who want to make us happy. Almost scholars think investigate for society's happy is more important than thier lives. We should memorize them. Therefore, I think the education prize have to be add.

My name is 김효원, and I will be writing about 'What new category I would add to the list and why?'. I will add education price. First, like Phytagoras, Aristotle, Socrates, and other scholars who contributed to our education. We can study hard and can be a good person because of thier investigation. If scholars don't investigate our education, we can't study and we can't be a good person and smart. So we have to give a price to a best scholar who contributes to education. Second, the scholars contribute to teach us and make our society good. They endeavor to make society good. Most people think 'It is the end after I die' but scholars are different. They want to make people more happy from their investigation. Their personality and thoughts are great. Scholars who investigate for people have to increase. Lastly, scholars who endeavor to make society good, should remain after we die. It will remain in our ancestor's memory when the scholars get a Noble Prize. We have to remember the good people who want to make us happy. We should remember them. Therefore, I think the education prize has to be added.

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