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Hello everyone, my name is Joon. Do you know about Novel Prize? Novel Price is awarded in many categories. For instance, it has physics, chemistry, medicine, literature and economics. When you can make a new category, what do you want to make? Guess what? I want to make a game category. First, Around the world, it has many peole who play the game. Among the many people, it has person who is good at play the game. When you are win at the game, you want to get a prize. I think gamers ,too. Then, Many people think this idea is crazy. However, game is good. Game makes you fun when you feel like boring. You can also relieve stress. Next, Game has a many category. For instance, it has horror, simulation, RPG, puzzle, and sports. So, game makes Nobel Prize more interesting. Then, if it has game category, many people are interest in The Novel Price and it will be fun. Then, The Novel Price is become more famous. Finally, this idea can make a new way of job. People who are not good at study, it can be a progamer, game designer, and game producer. Lastly, When I can make a new category, I want to make a game category. Because, it has a lot good things. Game feels like not good, but it can be a good way. I think this idea is good idea. This is my opinion. Thank you for listening my presentation.

Hello?, everyone. ?My name is Joon. Do you know about the Noble Prize? The Noble Prize is awarded in many categories. For instance, it has physics, chemistry, medicine, literature and economics. When you want to add a new category, what do you want to add? Guess what? I want to add a game category. First, the world has many people who play games. Among the many people, it has persons who are good at playing a game. When you win at a game, you want to get a prize. I think gamers too. Then, Many people think this idea is crazy. However, gaming is good. Games make you ?have fun when you feel bored. You can also relieve stress. Next, Games have many categories. For instance, it has horror, simulation, RPG, puzzle, and sports. So, gaming makes the Noble Prize more interesting. Then, if it has a game category, many people are interested in The Noble Prize and it will be fun. Then, The Noble Prize will become more famous. Finally, this idea can make a new way of jobs. People who are not good at studying, can become a progammer, game designer, and game producer. Lastly, when I can make a new category, I want to make a game category. Because, it has a lot of good things. Gaming feels like it's not good, but it can be played in a good way. I think this idea is a good idea. This is my opinion. Thank you for listening to my presentation.

?Comments: Hi Joon, It's katherine :) You did well in your essay. Make sure to check spelling and of course you want to add a game category. When I read that I knew it was you!! Good luck in becoming a programmer!

Grade: A