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? Hello my namis Kim dae-hwan. And, I'm going to talk about 'What new category which I want to add to The Nobel Prize'. And, I want to make a 'Incredible Prize.'

  It's similar with Guniness book. 'Incerdible Prize' will be given to people who have a greatest award at the athletics or fastest things like car, boat, rap etc. and other man or woman who do incredible things. And the man or woman have to have some witnesses to prove things that the man or woman really do that. And people who works for 'The Nobel Prize' will get reservation. And they take an election about which ones are the mopst incredible thing. And there will be 3 people to get 'Incredibel Prize'. The reasons why I want to add 'Incredibel Prize'. First, 'The Nobel Prize' is so stiff. Second, people (expect some expert; it's my opnion) will like it. Finally, if 'The Nobel Prize' have a 'Incredibel Prize' more people will interested in 'The Nobel Prize'.

  'Incredibel Prize' is the new category which I want to add to 'The Nobel Prize' list. And it will take a lot of advantages to 'The Nobel Prize'. And, thank you for reading :)

   Hello?, my namis Kim dae-hwan?, ?and I'm going to talk about 'What new category I want to add to The Nobel Prize', ?and, I want to make a?n 'Incredible Prize.'

  It's similar with ?the Guinness book. ?The 'Incerdible Prize' will be given to people who have ?the greatest award?s ?in athletics or ?are good in fastest things like car, boat, rap etc., and to other m?en or wom?en who ?can do incredible things. And?, the m?en or wom?en have to have some witnesses to prove things that the m?en or wom?en ?can really do that. And?, people who work for 'The Nobel Prize' will get ?a reservation. And?, they take an election about which ones are the most incredible thing?s. And?, there will be ?three people to get ?the 'Incredib?le Prize'. The reasons why I want to add 'Incredibl?e Prize' ?is because, first, 'The Nobel Prize' is so stiff, second, people expect some expert (in my op?inion) to like it. Finally, if 'The Nobel Prize' ha?s a?n 'Incredibel Prize' more people will ?be interested in 'The Nobel Prize'.

  ?The 'Incredibel Prize' is the new category which I want to add to 'The Nobel Prize' list. And?, it will be very advantageous to the 'The Nobel Prize'. Thank you for reading :)

?Comments: You did very well! make sure to add a to a word that starts with a consonant for example, a tree or an Incredible prize because an is added to work that starts with a vowel.

Grade: B+