The Simson School

Three words of wisdom Hello, my name is 신종진. I am class of 미리내M. Today I will start with my speech about story "Three words of wisdom" This story give many lesson. Now I talk about it. There were three men who lived in the country. They are so poor. So they decided to find jobs in the city. Along the way, they ran into an old man.Old man want to share his coins and his golden wisdom. Two men chose the coins,but another man chose golden wisdom. Another two man say he cannot be rich. the old man say "Don't take shortcuts.Don't ask about what does not concern you.Don't jump too quickly to conclusions." As they left the main road to take a short cut through the forest, the man said "Old man say 'Don't take a shortcut'" But another two men ignored. Unfortunately, the two men were attacked by bandits, and died. Unaware of his friend's fate he traveled the city.As night fell, he reached a huge ranch.The man surprise of rancher's serving.So he want to ask how the rancher be a rich, but then he remembered the old man's world. 'Don't ask about what doesn't concern you. So, he kept still.Suddenly the rancher revealed a head of man.and he said, "for this is what happened to the last man who asked how i made my rich. I will give my all coins, and gold." He was so happy! when he approached his house he saw a man who hugs he's wife. He was so angry, but think about third wisdom."don't jump to quickly to conclusions." And he know the man is he's son. He's familly surprise what he bring. They live happy forever. When i will be a wise man I will choose a coins.But three words of wisdom, save he's life and help to be a rich. When we heard the three words of wisdom, most of people will ignored. And most of people will choose the coins. Of course,three words of wisdom seem strange, it is help your entire life. When you heard some words of wisdoms, use that your life. It will give a help to you. Thank you for listening to my speech. Thank you so much!^^

Three words of wisdom 

Hello, my name is 신종진. I am in the class of 미리내M. Today?, I will start with my speech about a story ?called "Three ?Words of ?Wisdom?." This story ?has ?taught me many lesson?s. Now?, I ?will talk about it. There were three men who lived in the country. They were so poor. So they decided to find jobs in the city. Along the way, they ran into an old man. ?The ?old man want?ed to share his coins and his golden wisdom. Two men chose the coins, but another man chose the golden wisdom. The other two m?en sa?id that he cannot be rich. The old man said, "don't take shortcuts.Don't ask about what does not concern you. Don't jump too quickly to conclusions?." As they left the main road to take a short cut through the forest, the man said?, "Old man say '?don't take a shortcut," ?but ?the other two men ignored ?him. Unfortunately, the two men were attacked by bandits and died. Unaware of his friend's fate, the third man traveled the city. As night fell, he reached a huge ranch.The man ?was surprise?d ?by the rancher's serving. So?, he want?ed to ask how the rancher be?ca?me rich, but then he remembered the old man's word?s. 'Don't ask about what doesn't concern you. So, he kept still. Suddenly?, the rancher revealed a head of ?a man, and he said, "for this is what happened to the last man who asked how i made my rich. I will give ?you all ?my coins, and gold." He was so happy! ?When he approached his house, he saw a man hugging his wife. He was so angry, but then he thought about the third wisdom: "don't jump too quickly to conclusions." And?, he found out that the man was his son. His family ?was surprise?d with what he brought. They live?d happy, forever. If I met a wise man, I will choose the coins. But?, the three words of wisdom save?d the man's life and help?ed him become rich. When we hear the three words of wisdom, most people will ignore ?it. And?, most people will choose the coins. Of course, the three words of wisdom seem strange. It helps your entire life. When you hear some words of wisdom, use them in your life. It will give you a lot of help. Thank you for listening to my speech. Thank you so much!^^

Comments: You gave a nice, detailed speech. Good job! Next time, make sure to watch out for your spelling and punctuation (commas, periods). For example, He's = He is  BUT the word you want to use is his. For example, the man was HIS son not HE IS son. So you can't use He's = He is. Also, always