The Simson School

Sleeping for a few hours is terrible. It makes me tired. When I wake up, I feel very annoyed.So, I try to sleep early but it is hard. When I wake up, I daze off again a few seconds later. It makes me late to school. Also, I can't study at all. So, the teacher scolds me. Also, I feel irritable too. When I wake up, first, I feel angry. Just waking up makes me annoyed. It makes me not want to do something. I just feel tired and irritable. I think I shouldn't sleep late. It can make me have several health problems. Finally, I want to tell my friends not to sleep late. I hope my friends aren't sleeping late.

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Grade: A