The Simson School

  When I didn't sleep last night, I'm not very sleepy but I'm have no energy. I can't sleep well in another place, so I always not so feeling good in next morning.  

   In night, I can't sleep in night because of very liitle sound. So I sleep 4'oclock always. And next morning, I don't have energy so I have headache. And also I can't do hard thing like exercise or study. But that night, I can sleep well. I want to sleep well in another place. I'm so hard to do something in next day. Also I have to sleep because its not very good for health. I'm not sleepless, so life can compress.I didn't sleep in night so many times, so I'm not sleepy now, but l'm lonley when l didn't sleep in night, so I will try to sleep.  

 I have no energy when I didn't sleep well, so I have to sleep well. And also not just home, in another place too.

And next day, I feel like I don't have a appetite.So I'm not sleepless.

  When I don't sleep at night, I'm not very sleepy but I have no energy. I can't sleep well in another place, so I always don't feel so good in the morning.  

   At night, I can't sleep if there's even a low sound. So, I sleep at 4'Oclock, always. And, the next morning, I don't have any energy so I get a headache. And, I also can't do hard things like exercise or study. But, that night, I can sleep well. I want to sleep well in another place. It is so hard to do something the next day. Also, I have to sleep because its not very good for my health. If I sleep well then life will not be hard. I didn't sleep at night so many times, so I'm not sleepy now, but l'm lonely when l don't sleep at night, so I will try to sleep.  

 I have no energy when I don't sleep well, so I have to sleep well, not just at home but in another place too.

And, the next day, I won't feel like I don't have an appetite. So I will not be sleepless.

Comments: Hello, you did a good job explaining what you go through when you don't get much sleep! Try to double check your spelling and make sure to put a comma after and when and is used at the beginning of the sentence. Also, make sure to use an article before a noun such as an, a, the. Get lots of sleep on the weekend! Fighting~

Grade: B