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2015-09-22 숙제

작성자 : 이승주

구분 : 에세이

2015-09-24 오전 8:25:00

Few people in the world say they are not getting enough sleep, and few say they are. I orten wake up earlier than other days to go to the church. As for me, I will the difficulties and how I feel when I get up early. To start with, I feel tired and just not ready for the day. When I go to bed early, I feel just normal, but, when I wake up early, I want to sleep more. Then, I can't study well in school or other academy, Also it's sleepy too. I can't do alot of things these days because I am having alot of academies and homework to do. So I am insomniacs and I have a sleep deprived. My consistant sleep deperation can cause several health problems. In conclusion, I feel very tired and not ready for the day. and I cannot do many things when I wake up early.


Few people in the world say they are not getting enough sleep, and few say they are. I often wake up earlier than other days to go to church. As for me, I have difficulty getting up early. To start with, I feel tired and just not ready for the day. When I go to bed early, I feel just normal, but, when I wake up early, I want to sleep more. Then, I can't study well in school or at other academies. Also, I feel sleepy too. I can't do a lot of things these days because I am having a lot of academies and homework to do. So I am an insomniac and I am sleep deprived. My consistent sleep deprivation can cause several health problems. In conclusion, I feel very tired and not ready for the day, and I cannot do many things when I wake up early.


Comments: Very good choice of vocabulary and sentence structure. Good Job! I hope you can feel better and sleep more on the weekend. Good Luck!

Grade: A

 
Few people in the world say they are not getting enough sleep, and few say they are. I often wake up earlier than other days to go to church. As for me, I experience the difficulties of how I feel when I get up early. To start, I feel tired and just not ready for the day. When I go to bed early, I feel just normal, but when I wake up early, I want to sleep more. Then, I can't study well in school or at the other academies. Also, it makes me feel sleepy too. I can't do a lot of things these days because I go to a lot of academies and have a lot of homework to do. So I am an insomniac and I am sleep deprived. My consistent sleep deprivation can cause several health problems. In conclusion, I feel very tired and not ready for the day,and I cannot do many things when I wake up early.
 
Comments: It is very sad to hear that you're not getting enough sleep. Take it easy. I think you did great! Your sentence and paragraph structure is very consistent and well done! Don't worry too much about your spelling and don't let it make you an insomniac! Get lots of sleep over Chuseok break!
Grade: A
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