The Simson School

Sleeping few hours of sleep is terrible.It makes me tired.When I wake up,I feel like very annoying.So I tried to sleep early but it was hard.I thought I was not living in there. I feel tired.When I wake up,and stay on there I doze in a few second.It makes me late to school.Also I can't study at at all. So,I was scolded by teacher.Also,I feel irratable too.When I wake up,first I feel angry.Just waking up makes me annoying.It makes me don't want to do somethig.Just I feel tired and irratable. I think I shoudln't sleep late.It can make me have several health problem.Also,I want to say to my friends.I would tell them don't sleep late. I hope my friends aren't sleeping late.

Sleeping for a few hours is terrible. It makes me tired. When I wake up, I feel very annoyed. So I try to sleep early but it is hard. When I wake up, I daze off again a few seconds later. It makes me late to school. Also, I can't study at all. So, the teacher scolds me. Also, I feel irritable too. When I wake up, first, I feel angry. Just waking up makes me annoyed. It makes me not want to do something. I just feel tired and irritable. I think I shouldn't sleep late. It can make me have several health problems. Also, I want to say to my friends not to sleep late. I hope my friends aren't sleeping late.

Comments: Good use of vocabulary words such as annoyed and irritable. Try to work more on your spelling and sentence structure

Grade: B-